Andrew Hacket (Picture Book)

Author: Andrew Hacket (@AndrewCHacket)

Age Range: Picture Book

Agent: Dan Cramer, Flannery Literary Associates

The Query Letter:

Dear Mr. Cramer,

An ailing father and his son hike a familiar path at dusk, eager to glimpse their favorite constellations. But anticipation turns to disappointment. The comforting words whispered by Dad and the memory of that night take on new meaning for the boy when the time comes to hike alone.

Complete at 258 words, sparse text and descriptive language lay the foundation for THE STARS YOU DON’T SEE, a lyrical picture book about grief and loss. Readers who enjoy The Memory Box: A Book About Grief and Dance Like a Leaf will enjoy this story.

I am very appreciative of the query critique you provided me and was excited to hear about your interest in this story.

I am a member of the Society for Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators (SCBWI) as well as an active member of two local critique groups. I am a 2020 Fall Writing Frenzy winner and I received an honorable mention in Susanna Hill’s Halloweensie contest. I am a second grade teacher of 16 years.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Andrew Hacket

Bonus: PB authors: visit Andrew's blog for a ton of useful information, as well as a weekly chance to win either a book or a critique from a published author!

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